First it was just you present,
just you on this whole earth.
And I had to leave us in pieces,
for they did not match since their birth.
Now the things have really changed,
and it's just me all alone.
Still how I wish to myself,
if only present there was your clone...
Does that mean I still love you?
But I often try to walk new roads...
And I don't know what I really want,
why would I want to take the load?
It has all been down and deep,
and I wonder when it'd be my day...
And now that words can't express it,
what would you have me say?
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I would like to clarify that I am not much of a poet. I have written only 4 poems last year. And none before that. I write poems when I get the urge to write. Like when I feel I can't concentrate on anything without writing a poem. So here you go, with my first substantial public poem.
luv d poem....makes me think too!!!
ReplyDeleteits filled wid sadness and dnt like to see u sad..
but still its one of a kind...d best
ULTIMATUM...
left me shocked!!!
Not bad dude.. you have done it justice :)
ReplyDeleteHmm...
ReplyDeleteMan, when i read this poem.. the first thing that came to my mind was, that, it sure is the writing of a person who has lost someone really special, to him, of course...
though it must have happened a long time back.. but, it seems the person is not over the one who he lost. well.. i think this is what it is all about... it's just me, though.. and i, honestly, suck at interpreting poems and stuff... but i tried..
Another thing, (if what i said is true) that doesn't sound like you Abhijit :)
But, needless to say, you have really done an awesome work :D
lol, also, i am proud to have a "writer" friend like you hehehe... All the best :)
Keep posting new stuff, man..